Mini Fic No. 2

[mrv3000]

If you call 2 a roll, then I'm on a mini-fic roll, baby! Sorry, vicki595 (and anyone else who may care), I stick poked Steve. He's still asleep. (Man those 40-foot dinosaurs can snore!)

Okay, *who* gets the blame for this one - yamadara or nandamai? It's all somewhat confusing. And might need a bit of explanation. (Of course, things really got interesting in the talk-back comments.)

Spoilers: Nightwalkers (but not really). Rating: PG-13 (but not really).

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Jonas looked up at Major Carter who was staring down at him, a questioning look on her face.

"So...two, huh?" she asked, absently patting her leather pants.

Jonas winced. It wasn't as if he could do anything about it and he really wanted everything to be right, it being his first time and all. "Is it going to be a problem?"

"No, no," she said quickly. "It was just unexpected."

"You sure?"

"Yeah, it's fine. Really." She gave him a small smile. "Variety is the spice of life, right? It's just the size..." she murmured as she looked back down with wide eyes.

Jonas internally sighed. Well, at least she wasn't making him feel bad about it. He looked around the small motel room. Now there was just the question of...

"Major Carter? What about..."

"Sam. Call me Sam."

"Really?"

"Well, it's probably about time, don't you think?" she asked, still wide-eyed and never quite dragging her eyes up to look at his face.

Jonas grinned. "Okay, Sam. What about Teal'c?"

"He's kelnoreeming. He'll get in on this later."

Jonas couldn't help the surprised look on his face, but he nodded anyway. After all, Major Carter...uh, Sam was clearly in charge.

He watched Sam sigh as she looked from one to the other, most likely trying to decide which to go for first.

"Jonas, I just can't believe you went and got two extra-extra-large pizzas. And with my credit card."

"It's too much, isn't it," Jonas sulked. "Go ahead and yell. Please yell. I deserve it."

"Well, if it'll make you feel any better," Sam said as she sat down at the table and grabbed a slice. "Jonas, you've been a very bad boy."

Comments

[chiroho.livejournal.com]

Heh! Was really wondering where you were going there for a sec, and then the pizzas arrived and I cracked up!

Before that I either thought that Jonas was about to, um, get some, or he was about to be punished by 'Disciplinarian!Sam', and I couldn't tell which!! LOL!

Very amusing!

[mrv3000.livejournal.com]

Heh! Was really wondering where you were going there for a sec, and then the pizzas arrived and I cracked up!

Before that I either thought that Jonas was about to, um, get some, or he was about to be punished by 'Disciplinarian!Sam', and I couldn't tell which!! LOL!

Had you worried there for a minute, didn't I? {g}

Very amusing!

Heh. Thanks!

Bwahahahaha

[yamadara.livejournal.com]

Okay that was just great. For a minute there I thought, hmm another sandwich fic?

My favorite:

"It's too much, isn't it," Jonas sulked. "Go ahead and yell. Please yell. I deserve it."

"Well, if it'll make you feel any better," Sam said as she sat down at the table and grabbed a slice. "Jonas, you've been a very bad boy."

"Sure Sam. Want to use the handcuffs on me?" heh heh

So does that mean Sam/Jonas/Teal'c is gonna be nicknamed the pizza fic?

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[mrv3000.livejournal.com]

Okay that was just great. For a minute there I thought, hmm another sandwich fic?

Heh. Thanks! I was trying to think of a way of writing it without *really* writing it. :P

"Sure Sam. Want to use the handcuffs on me?" heh heh

Okay, just decided. The fic is 100% your fault. {g}

So does that mean Sam/Jonas/Teal'c is gonna be nicknamed the pizza fic?

LOL! And, oh boy.

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[yamadara.livejournal.com]

Okay, just decided. The fic is 100% your fault.

*beams proudly*

Then I guess my work here is done. *g*

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[mrv3000.livejournal.com]

*beams proudly*
Then I guess my work here is done. *g*

{watches as the caped Yam strikes a dramatic pose, then flies away}

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[chiroho.livejournal.com]

Had you worried there for a minute, didn't I?

Well you had me *concerned* for a few lines, I'll say that much! *g*

Thanks!

You're welcome!

[matt1969.livejournal.com]

Hehe, good one :)

I've a feeling that given the choice between sex and food, well, Jonas would choose food every time *g*

[mrv3000.livejournal.com]

Hehe, good one :)

Thanks!

I've a feeling that given the choice between sex and food, well, Jonas would choose food every time *g*

Hmm...you never know about that guy. {g}

[vicki595.livejournal.com]

Sorry, vicki595 (and anyone else who may care), I stick poked Steve. He's still asleep. (Man those 40-foot dinosaurs can snore!)

Mwahaha! Were you blindfolded at the time though? {grins}


As for the fic... {giggles}... I was slightly concerned, but I figured that if it had been anything really 'icky then we would have had huge warning signs saying something really amusing that hyari could have feedbacked for you! :)

It's too early. I need caffeine.

[mrv3000.livejournal.com]

As for the fic... {giggles}... I was slightly concerned, but I figured that if it had been anything really 'icky then we would have had huge warning signs saying something really amusing that hyari could have feedbacked for you! :)

I love messing with people *way* too much. That's wrong, isn't it?

It's too early. I need caffeine.

Ooo - lovely caffeine. Need coffee.

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[vicki595.livejournal.com]

That's wrong, isn't it?

Probably, but somehow we still love you.

Ooo - lovely caffeine. Need coffee.

Mmm. I want another drink, but I'm scared of going downstairs because I'm going to be handed a dog and told to walk it

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[nandamai]

Okay, just decided. The fic is 100% your fault. {g}

This is what *I'm* saying. ;)

[mrv3000.livejournal.com]

Probably, but somehow we still love you.

Aww...

Mmm. I want another drink, but I'm scared of going downstairs because I'm going to be handed a dog and told to walk it

Coffee. Chores. Coffee. Chores.

Very conflicting.

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[vicki595.livejournal.com]

Very conflicting.

Yup. I chose chocolate. I've also decided that I need a kettle for my room. It'll work fine: hot chocolate doesn't need anything, I drink my tea black and I'll just put Baileys in the coffee!!

[mrv3000.livejournal.com]

Hmm...Baileys would be good. :)

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[vicki595.livejournal.com]

Hmm...Baileys would be good. :)

Yeah... I've got two little minis in my room! Mmmm...

[angst-angel.livejournal.com]

Hee, loved the end - "Go ahead and yell. Please yell. I deserve it." *snerk* Pizza fic.... *snickers*

[mrv3000.livejournal.com]

*g* Thanks!

You know, I really don't know what I was on yesterday.