Another one.

[mrv3000]

More spring cleaning of fic. Thanks again to poohmusings for betaing one of my old, unbetaed stories!

Unlike the last fic, this one only had a few grammar/spelling changes, so if you've read it before, ain't much different.

The Temple PG; light S/J; Humor/Adventure; Set in early S6. References to The Tomb.

And in other news, I took the *strong* cold medicine this morning, which means that I'll probably be passed out in 20 minutes and 30 seconds. 29. 28. 27.

Comments

[sandra47.livejournal.com]

:) Yep, I remember reading that one! And I read it again cause I thought it was great! Love Jack's reaction at the end! lol

[mrv3000.livejournal.com]

Hee hee! Thanks! :)

[besyd.livejournal.com]

This was fun the first time around ... more so this time.

Sweet merciful crap!

I'm just going to adopt that exclamation. That whole section of the story got me going.

Something brushed past his leg.

Total. Creep. Out.

Loved that ending! :^D

[mrv3000.livejournal.com]

This was fun the first time around ... more so this time.

Wheee!

Sweet merciful crap!

I'm just going to adopt that exclamation. That whole section of the story got me going.

Thanks! And Jack actually adopted the phrase from Homer Simpson first. ;)

Total. Creep. Out.

Mwahahahaha!

Loved that ending! :^D

Thanks! :)

[audrich.livejournal.com]

Well, it was the first time for me :)
I loved the way you described Carter assembling those jeeps - hell! Even *I* found her hot *g*
Jack was having a very Jack-like day, wasn't he?
"Or impending doom. I seem to remember hearing something about destruction. A.K.A. impending doom!"
*sniggering*
"Better than a canary. Teal'c, take lead."
*LOL!*
And those creature-things! Yuk! Creep-out indeed!
And he wondered why he was prematurely gray. "Are you hurt?"
*BG*
And the final part of the end scene?
Sweet :)
Thanks, Michelle.

[mrv3000.livejournal.com]

Well, it was the first time for me :)

Ooooo!

I loved the way you described Carter assembling those jeeps - hell! Even *I* found her hot *g*

Hee hee! There's just something about her being a grease monkey!

Jack was having a very Jack-like day, wasn't he?

Oh yeah!

"Or impending doom. I seem to remember hearing something about destruction. A.K.A. impending doom!"
*sniggering*
"Better than a canary. Teal'c, take lead."
*LOL!*

Hee!

And those creature-things! Yuk! Creep-out indeed!

Mwahahahahaha! ;)

And he wondered why he was prematurely gray. "Are you hurt?"
*BG*

Awww. :)

And the final part of the end scene?
Sweet :)
Thanks, Michelle.

Glad you liked it! :)

[nhawk.livejournal.com]

OOh, hadn't read this one before! It was great. Lots of fun. I really felt like I was there. Very cool. Hee. Thanks, Michelle! :D

[mrv3000.livejournal.com]

OOh, hadn't read this one before! It was great. Lots of fun.

Yay! Glad you liked it! :)

I really felt like I was there.

*skitters*

Very cool. Hee. Thanks, Michelle! :D

Nonono. Thank *you*, Kate! :)

[angst-angel.livejournal.com]

Jack quickly racked his brain. "A ziggurat?" he asked, more than a little pleased with himself.
"No. I think it's more of a stepped pyramid."
Jack looked at him. "Which is...?!"
Jonas flipped a few pages of his book. "Oh. A ziggurat."

*snerk* Very cute, Michelle! But ick - evil little monkey creatures! *g*

[mrv3000.livejournal.com]

*snicker* Thanks! :)

[samkicksass.livejournal.com]

LOL! Loved that ending.

I love Jack. :)

[mrv3000.livejournal.com]

Hee hee hee! He's such a scamp!